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Offline PlaymoMan

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The Wild West - Chapter One.
« on: August 28, 2013, 01:09:17 »
My first photo-story in months...enjoy! :)

The convoy meandered through the rocky terrain, the well-oiled wheels of the coach rumbling along the gravel path. The Reno-Denver-St. Louis Express had passed through Denver three days ago, and was making it's way to St. Louis, the final stop. The sky was a brilliant blue, not a single cloud in the sky and the sun was at it's zenith.

At the reins was Benjamin Lewis, an experienced driver who had been at the helm for over a decade. He and his coach had traveled through searing heat, extreme cold, and been attacked by bandits, Native Americans, and a myriad of other creatures - human or animal.

Inside the coach was Thomas Preston, the owner of the National Bank. He had with him some precious baggage - thousands of dollars destined for St. Louis, to finance construction projects in the city.

Ordered to accompany the coach back in Reno, Sergeant Howard and his aide, Stewart Mac were to be stationed in a Missouri-based border-town.

Rory Galton, a soldier in the Union Army was picked up in Denver, and was to be stationed in the same town as Sgt. Howard and Stewart Mac.


Can anything possibly go wrong on this seemingly perfect journey?

To be continued...
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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2013, 14:28:53 »
Benjamin stared into the distance, watching the wildlife around him. As his eyes scanned the path up ahead, he noticed what looked like a hastily erected barrier. He squinted his eyes so he could make it out more clearly. It consisted of two fallen maple trees - it looked as though they had been cut down. He pulled back hard on the reins and the horses reared and whinnied. The Sergeant, noticing the barrier as well, did the same.


Benjamin warily approached the barrier with rifle in hand. Not a sound was heard behind the fallen trees. The Sergeant and his aide studied the path up ahead for any signs of human activity - none could be seen.

At this point Benjamin was frustrated, as the barrier offered no openings for himself and the others to squeeze through, much less the coach. The Sergeant thought it was better to be cautious and remain here for the time being, although Benjamin disagreed. He thought that the coach should try to find another path as soon as possible.
"Thomas Preston has an agenda, you know! Delaying the delivery of cash is not an option!" argued Benjamin.
"Be reasonable," said the Sergeant "we'd be wasting more time trying to find another path than staying here."

Reluctantly, Benjamin agreed to stay put for the night.
"But we leave at the crack of dawn tomorrow!"he reminded the Sergeant before dozing off.

Stewart Mac was left on sentry duty, and as the night fell, the warm glow of his torch settled over the landscape. He wondered, what could possibly be behind that barrier?


End of chapter one.

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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2013, 20:55:40 »
Oh camping! A great start to the story, looking forward to more  :munch:

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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 14:16:31 »
That's a great start  :love: :love:

The close up pictures are perfect !

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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 19:58:23 »
Thank you! I'm currently shooting chapter two, it should be uploaded this evening! :)
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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #5 on: August 30, 2013, 01:13:04 »
The computer is acting up right now, and I'm not able to upload any photos yet - I'll have them up tomorrow. :)
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Re: The Wild West - Chapter One.
« Reply #6 on: August 30, 2013, 20:47:57 »
Wonderful story so far, can't wait for chapter 2.  Love the way you got the horses to rear up when they got to the barrier, very clever!   :)9

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