George, if I may...
You use the word quietly too many time in that story.

There is a good trick for combating repeated words though,
if you just use similes it sounds much better..

But excellent part of the story anyway!!!!

I wanna know what happens!
If indeed that is the case, we most certainly need to!!!
But let's wait for the reports and then, if necessary, act!
Indeed, these are my intentions as well.
Though we cannot defeat the powers of Krull by ourselves...
Methinks it is time to begin gathering the of the other kingdoms into a temporary alliance against this threat.
Should the threat turn false we can disband the alliance.