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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #10 on: September 24, 2010, 19:02:10 »
Gus this was excellent!! I really love this play!!!  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
The custom figures mix very nicely with the plot! The angles of your pictures are also very good!

Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #11 on: September 24, 2010, 19:06:25 »
I usually tell all sorts of things about my plans in pirate stories along with these medieval stories in the Little Theatre thread, may everyone feel free to ask about it or read general stuff there: http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=2490.0

On the medieval stories, there's the Drammatis Personae thread, which might be useful to gather info on my plots: http://www.playmofriends.com/forum/index.php?topic=2309.0

I don't think it's necessary to make a comments thread. I'd like to hear your thoughts in the intervals in this thread all right, it works fine. I hope to publish the part II still today :)

This weekend will be a little busy for me, outside, though, and maybe I'll only be able to post parts IIIa & IIIb next week :-\

There's a sequence for the Acz story, which has to be shot yet ... I hope I'm getting to it, but people know me ... It's never too certain. Appearently, the Moirai conspire against my playmo-activities :-[

But now I have knight smilies to guard :knight: me :knight: .. what could go wrong? ::)

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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #12 on: September 24, 2010, 19:45:10 »
Awesome story Gus! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
I really cant wait to hear more! ;D ;D ;D
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #13 on: September 24, 2010, 20:56:27 »
Very well told and nicely shot Gus! Can't wait for the rest of it!

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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2010, 03:10:14 »
II
Supplies



The Acz is almost on the border line
between Tapia and the Plains of Degandorf,
which is western ally district of Moguntia.
Some peasants and villagers of Degandorf
used to go up to Murata frequently,
in the days of the Weekly Royal Fair.
The hill of the Acz is a shortcut for those
who go on foot from one village to the other.



Although the fortress can be held by two men, it is always better to
have four. In times of peace, though, it makes no great difference.
And maybe ...
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #15 on: September 25, 2010, 03:17:19 »

See previous post


Someone might approach unnoticed.



(Good thing not always it is a thief.)
This girl is making the way from Degandorf to Murata. She comes from
the east road.



Not many people come without cars, so usually this way ins't much used.
There's a broader way to the south, underhill. And they paved it, too,
in the Roman manner. But this passage over the Acz is a simple path.
« Last Edit: September 25, 2010, 03:49:21 by Gustavo »
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #16 on: September 25, 2010, 03:25:42 »
One can't say he isn't surprised to realize that
someone approached from the east without any warnings.
Good thing it isn't a thief.


RUFON "Grof!", says with himself, "... The vegetable girl."



NARDO "Hello up there! Is anybody home?"
GUS "It's Nardo!"
MASTER BEL "The girl? So early? Good."



ROMEO "Miss Nardo, Welcome! Please, let me give you a hand!
NARDO "Why, thank you, Romeo ..."
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #17 on: September 25, 2010, 03:29:53 »

NARDO "You shouldn't bother, actually ..."
ROMEO "Please, don't be modest, miss! I can handle this!"



GUS "Maid Nardo, it's always a pleasure to see you."
NARDO "Why, thank you, Gus. You're so kind, as usual."
ROMEO "(Grunf)"



NARDO "Good day, Master Bel, sir. I have brought you some supplies."
MASTER BEL "Well, that's great, lass. We're very grateful for your diligence."
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #18 on: September 25, 2010, 03:34:09 »

NARDO "And how have your days been, sire?"
MASTER BEL "We don't have much news up here, I got to say ... So, everything is fine, all right."



MASTER BEL "I still have cheese, and the honey you brought last time. Thank you for the bread. We were lacking bread."
NARDO "And I have brought you something else, too, sire ..."



NARDO "Apples."
MASTER BEL "Oh, good, good! I appreciate that, lassie! Thank you very much."
NARDO "Oh, not at all, sire!"
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Re: The Fortress on The Acz ~ An old story
« Reply #19 on: September 25, 2010, 03:38:50 »

MASTER BEL "Is there anything we can do for you, lass?"
NARDO "Don't bother sire, I'll walk ahead, see a cousin in Murata, spend a few days there, actually. Bye! See you next week, I hope."
MASTER BEL "Good-bye. Thank you, lass. Go in peace, and take care."
ROMEO "Here, miss, let me help you come down."



NARDO "Thanks, Romeo ... The basket is empty, now. I can do it myself. But thanks for your attention, sir. Bye-bye everyone!"
MASTER BEL "Go in peace, lassie! Mind the wolves!"
GUS "Good-bye, miss."
(RUFON "(hof!)")
ROMEO "Bye-bye! ..."



GUS "Now that the flower is gone, Romeo, would you care to attend back to your empty watch post?"
ROMEO "(Humpf!)"
RUFON "huh huh!"
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