Great photos and story so far!
In the first photo the king's drinking horn is obscuring his face. I'd have retaken this from a different angle, but actually this picture is so similar to the second it doesn't really add anything. You coud remove it and combine the text for the first two pictures.*
Lots of left-haned people in the story, is that deliberate? The usual ratio is about 1 in 10.
The longship is a ship, not a boat
* A while ago I had an idea for telling a series of photostories in just 12 pictures or less, a bit like a cartoon strip. It requires discipline and skill to get everything into that small number of photos, so of course I didn't do many.