Hello Bill,
As allways this installment is first rate. Again the sense of communication was captured really well, but there were other aspects going on. I really like how the fire fighters turn up after finishing their tasks only to be confronted with the bad news. I liked the way you captured the moment when the fire fighters girlfriend is told the terrible news, the way she is looking away slightly gives me the impression of disbelief and sadness. I cant wait for the final installment although i have the impression the outcome will not be a good one 
. I wait in anticipation to see how you tackle the very final chapter to this story, i have often wondered how i would do this myself 
Tim 
You have captured my idea perfectly, Tim
! As I said earlier, these last 2 parts were difficult to put together due to the way things have progressed. I guess it's like in real movies where there are always calm before the storm effects, but you have to balance them carefully so it doesn't become too boring
! Keep watching, the finales are in process
, & thank you for the positive feedback
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