I'm reading the episodes Gus, as I can see other people are too, but waiting to see what happens next.
Each episode is quite short, so the story is progressing quite slowly. That's fine, that's your preferred style. I presumne you have a definite end in view for each story, but as we haven't go there yet, commenting now feels like interrupting the storyteller.
When I post my stories I try to reach some punch line or gag at the end, usually within ten or a dozen photos, that ends that particular tale, though many people seem to miss this joke, maybe because of language difficulties. Tim's stories usually starts out strange, rapidly progress off-the-wall, before going completely bat-[censored]-crazy.
I'm hoping to get more technically adept over time with my stuff, creating slideshows with speech bubbles and possibly background music, so the action all unfolds on one mouse click.
Also bear in mind this is quite a small circle of friends, maybe 30 active regular posters, and most people aren't creating stories - we've had a few older ones re-cycled in the last year (and very good they were too, remembering thinking of Sylvia's Home for Christmas and Gordon's rescue scene), but I think only Timotheos, you and I have posted more than two new stories or episodes each.
You could post your stories on other Playmobil sites to see if you get more response, but I think most people enjoy reading them but don't feel the need to praise or criticise.