My first story: 'the forest'

[Pynedor]

Great story so far!

[lee gray]

Lets hope its a friendly Snake.

[PlaymoZoo]

Lets hope its a friendly Snake.

I wouldn't be so sure about that... 

[PlaymoZoo]

-PART 4 (I think)-

Rachel had no time to think. She jumped forward and simply picket the snake up. The animal was moving around  and made himself ready to attack, but Rachel threw it away as fast as she could.
The snake landed safely on the ferns and quickly crawled away.


She gasped, thinking of what had just happened. Then she looked at Ray, who was still lying on his back. She wondered if he had any idea what happened. ‘The.. the snake is gone, Ray.’
He sat straight up and looked around ‘How?’ he asked. ‘I picked it up by its tail and threw the awful snake over there.’ And she pointed towards the ferns. Suddenly Ray started to laughing. It looked like he had the giggles. Was he getting crazy?
‘Why on earth are you laughing?!’ Rachel asked, confused. ‘It’s.. it’s just that you- you threw a poisonous snake as big as your arm,’ he stopped to what looked like laughing and chocking at the same time, ‘in the bush  with you bare hands, after I jumped down from a huge plant!’
‘and that is something I never thought I would say!’  for some reason Rachel started laughing too.
Not even because it was funny, just because it was so crazy you just couldn’t be nót laughing.


‘shall we go, now?’ she asked after about 5 minutes non-stop laughing. ‘yeah,’ -giggle- ‘yeah, I’m done laughing,’ –giggle- ‘I guess,’ he answered. ‘Hey, Ray, I think we already walked for 700 meters, now. Where do we go?’ He looked at his map again and  wondered where they were. Ah, over there, he thought, 700 meters… East… ‘That way,’ he pointed, ‘to the west. There should be the Dande Row River.’ ‘okay, let’s go then!’



to be continued...

[Birdie]

Whoohoo, great story so far 

I love how you did the forrest, it looks excellent: dense, full of detail & variation.
And their sleeping bags, love how you did that!

+ I wish I had towels like that 

[Pynedor]

The sleeping bags are definitely a cool addition.

[DrDalek6]

Great work sof ar you've got a good way of telling the story and the forest scenery looks great, looking forward to seeing what happens next 

[PlaymoZoo]

Whoohoo, great story so far 

I love how you did the forrest, it looks excellent: dense, full of detail & variation.
And their sleeping bags, love how you did that!

+ I wish I had towels like that 

Thank you, I liked putting some real plants in the diorama.

The sleeping bags are definitely a cool addition.

Thanks, it's the green sleeping bag from the arctic dino- set and the yellow towel from a plus-set rolled up

Great work sof ar you've got a good way of telling the story and the forest scenery looks great, looking forward to seeing what happens next 

thank you all! 

[PlaymoMan]

Whew, I'm glad that Ray managed to escape that snake unharmed. This story is great!!

[PlaymoZoo]

-PART 4-

‘I can’t believe you were actually right! We are at the Dande Row river!’ Ray almost couldn’t hear Rachel over the sound of the river. Of course, I am right, he thought.



He walked a bit further and felt his socks getting wet of the moist ground.
Wow, that is one river! was his first thought after looking at the view.

His second thought was: how on earth are we going to get to the other side?!
Once again,  Rachel read his mind. ‘So, how are we going to get to the other side? We can’t go through the water, it would be too dangerous. ’ she said.
He looked around and saw a big liana hanging on one of the trees. Could he…?



He pointed at the liana and said: ‘we can swing over the river using that liana,’ and he walked to the tree. ‘whoa, Ray, wearing Indiana jones’ hat doesn’t make you him!’ said Rachel quickly.
‘So what did you want to do then?’ he replied ‘I must try this.’
‘okay,’ she said, ‘but you go first!’



‘There we go!’ he said and jumped from the tree…

To be continued...