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Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« on: June 18, 2012, 20:52:39 »
As I said in another thread I'm planning on buying more of the prehistoric theme. I like the theme a lot and I'm using it in a story which will be started in this thread. Besides taking the pictures of the playmo and come up with some story line I'm currently practising with Adobe Photoshop to get some nice backgrounds. So the pictures are not as great as I would like them to be at the moment, I hope they will get better and any advice on photography, adobe, working with real backgrounds is appreciated.

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Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
In a cave then thousand years ago an old man visits a wise magician. The magician is younger but his knowledge reaches far beyond that of other man and that's why they call him a magician. It is said he can make fire when it rains, he talks with animals using a special flute and most of all he has contact with the gods. The old man Ganbar is the leader of a tribe of hunters. The magician had asked Ganbar to meet him in the cave of the ancestors. The stories of their past are drawn on the walls in the caves and in the deep their treasures are save for the man hunting tribes. Those man hunting tribes actually hunt for women, children, food and treasures of other tribes instead of hunting on animals. The magician and Ganbar have a meeting of great importance for their women were robbed last week and the men want revenge! ‘Great Ganbar, I have something here I wanted to show you, wait a moment’, says the magician.


The magician walks further down the cave and Ganbar waits and wonders why he has been summoned. Especially now when time is short for the tribe has to get ready to avenge themselves. He never liked the young magician with his sly words and sleek advice. In the old days, when he was young the tribe eldest alone was ruler and the tribes magician was just there when advice was needed. In those times skills in the art of fighting and strength were of most importance. Nowadays, it seems all the other way around. I want to see that magician talk a mammoth into be caught and slaughtered.


‘My dear Ganbar look at what I found the other day.’ ‘Holy mother of earth and sky’ shrieks Ganbar, ‘wh….what is that?’ Before Ganbars eyes a long blinking yellow to red staff flickers in the light of the fire. At the end of the staff a semicircle is attached and is made of the same material and shimmers even more. ‘It looks like an axe,’ ‘Is it a magic axe from the Gods?’ asks Ganbar. The magician suppresses his contempt and says: ‘No, great Ganbar, the gods did not make this. It is from the hand of a man beyond the icy mountains. It belongs to the people who live there with very strange habits and, obviously, miraculous craftsmanship’


‘I will hand it over to you, so you can see how it enjoys the sunlight for it shimmers even brighter then. I think you and your son can find some good use for it and maybe try out the material for hunting or building.’ While the magician hands over the shiny axe Ganbars mind already working out some scenarios for what his next moves would be to get their women and children back using this new weapon. ‘Thank you magician, I will look after it and contact my son Andar, the bravest and most cunning warrior and hunter on this side of the mountains.’ ‘Yes great Ganbar, you do that, for knowledge of this object could be of great importance for our future. I’ve been told that the people who create these kinds of materials also have knowledge to make their own food. They don’t hunt, they don’t gather fruit from the forest and fishing is done for leisure, explains the magician.


In the magicians mind other plans are forged for he actually is not interested in the axe, but on how it is made. ‘Well, goodbye then, and let the gods be at our hand. We still cannot make our own food and have to hunt for meat and gather berries and apples. We will consult each other in short notion how to handle our loss and how this weapon can help us.’ Ganbar says. He speaks in a casual voice for knowing this way the magician does not suspect that Ganbar is aware of the true agenda of the magician.

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Re: Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2012, 20:55:30 »
Later that evening under the bright moonlight Ganbar is taking a midnight snack of mammoth stew which was leftover from yesterday. His eyes are fixed on the dancing flames and his mind contemplates on the words the magician told him. They make their own food… how is that possible? If we could make our own food more time could be spent on training for hunting. No wait, we do not have to train for hunting for we do not need to hunt anymore. Alright then, we could focus are training on man-to-man fights to fight off the man hunting tribes, so they will not rob us again.


Later that night Ganbar is sleeping in his mammoth tent and while the moon slightly sinks beneath the horizon and his fire is slowly dimming, Ganbar has bad dreams of vicious warrior tribes robbing their women and dreams of war to obtain them back. 


However, later his dreams are getting better and he dreams what old cavemen dream about: ’Wild animals in a forest paradise. ’

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« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2012, 20:56:59 »
That morning on the other side of the village Andar is training Bror and Brul. They are his best students and every morning Andar sharpens their spear fighting skills. Every tribe in the neighborhood knows that these guys are the best spearmen alive, after Andar that is of course. ‘Alright Brul’, encourages Andar, ‘thrusting backwards is working alright, just don’t forget to spin round your axis to keep eye contact.’ ‘Keep facing your opponent at all time.’ He suddenly notices form the corner of his eyes his father approaching, and as always Andar wants to prove himself to his father. Once he was the mightiest hunter of all, and the only man alive who has ever killed a smilodon with his bare hands.


So he shouts:’Brul… Bror you two against me and when you win this little boar is yours.’ Well, this does not need to be said twice, because both Brul and Bror, confident about their selves after long training sessions, take the opportunity at once.


Unfortunately for Brul and Bror, Andar is as swift as fox and jumps forward and with the back of his spear Brul is disarmed and losses balance. Simultaneously Andar grasps the spearhead of Bror.


While holding his opponents spear he makes a 180 degrees turn and Bror who still hold his spear is out of balance too.


The force of this sudden acceleration disarms Bror before he hits the ground. Andar faces Bror with his spear pointing at his head. Bror and Brul have no idea what happened to them, for they both stood right up facing Andar just two seconds ago.

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« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2012, 20:58:06 »
Andar gives Bror a hand lifting him up. ‘Well done my son’, says Ganbar with a smile. ‘Quite a swift action, seems you did not want to lose your diner.’ ‘Of course in my days you would eat dirt and that small boar would be mine.’


Ander teases his father by saying to the old man: ‘Well father we will never know for sure, but we might wrestle over it.’ ‘I’ll swing this stick and you will not know what hit you first….’, Says Ganbar with a smile.


‘But seriously now, come my son we have to talk. Let’s go to your place and give Bror and Brul some time off to relax a little.’


After reaching Andars tent at the edge of the forest, Anders throws his dinner on a log and Ganbar look at Andars’ Mammoth tent and smiles. ‘I see you prefer the newest mode using a standing Mammoth so you can stand up right. I will never get used to it, although I see the advantages. Let’s sit down my son we have a lot to talk about’, he says out loud while changing the tone of his voice in his last sentence.


(To be continued)
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Re: Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2012, 01:23:53 »
Great story!  Nice pics and backgrounds as well.  Can't wait to see more.   :clap:
 

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Re: Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2012, 08:38:27 »
WOOOOW :love: This is so beautyful and well made! Great scenes, exciting story-line, unique theme and realistic caracters. Especially the night- pics of Gandar and his mammoth tent.. that white owl in the tree! Also historically accurate, the hunter- collecters did not know how to make their own food and copper was new in the stone age.

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« Reply #6 on: June 19, 2012, 08:51:36 »
Excellent work. :)9 :)9 Your pictures are fantastic, I like all the scenes but my favourite pictures are these in the night with the moon. :love: :love: :love: Wonderful idea, well done. :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Great story too. :)9 :)9 :)9 I will go back to see the pictures for many times. :lol: :lol:

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Re: Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« Reply #7 on: June 19, 2012, 10:31:24 »
Great story and pictures, and good poses for the practice battle.

Only thing I'd change would be the background picture of the very bright green grass, it looks a little off to me. The other background pictures look perfect for it though.  :)

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« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2012, 11:29:30 »
Nicely done! I look forward to more also.
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Re: Andar and the secret of the copper axe.
« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2012, 15:46:30 »
Beautiful pictures  :love: :love: !!! Interesting story!!!  love the picture where Ganbar is sleeping in his mammoth  :love: :love: :love: