"Honeymoon in Africa"

[Luis]

So she soon came up with an idea to rescue her husband…But Fred now didn't know what was worse...his new and stubborn hairy fan, a giant monster behind the tree or his angry wife!

Priscilla: Fred! You better catch this or I’ll kill you before all these beasts do it!





Fred: Ouch! Help! Ouch! Don’t pull the liana so hard Priscilla! Can’t you see she won’t let me go?!

[Luis]

Such was the pressure on Fred with the liana that he and his wife ended up falling down from the trees.

Fred and Priscilla: Ouch!





They quickly stood up and ran to where the jeep was.

Fred: Hurry! They’re coming!!!

Priscilla: And what do you think I’m doing?!!






Priscilla: That female gorilla should know who rules here!
Fred: You’re the best cutie pie!
Priscilla: I know...See you later alligators!!!




Are Fred and Priscilla really that safe? What other hazardous situations will they encounter now that they're getting into the dense jungle? Will they ever find their 3 lost friends? Find out in Chapter 3 later this week!

[Luis]

That's it for now, folks. More soon!

[bonniebeth]

Great chapter, Luis! Can't wait to see the rest. I loved how her face turned red when she was angry.

[Wolf Knight]

  So funny and entertaining, Luis!!! Very well done!!!

[Rhalius]

great story, how did Fred end up there though?

[WarriorOfToys]

  So funny!!!
And I love the background from the lion king.

[tonguello]

  very funny Luis. Loved the gorila part!! 

Just a question... is Dominique a woman? Isn't that a woman's name? 

[bonniebeth]

It can be a man or woman's name, more commonly a man. You say it with the emphasis on the first syllable when it's a man's name, and on the last syllable when it's a woman's name.

[tonguello]

It can be a man or woman's name, more commonly a man. You say it with the emphasis on the first syllable when it's a man's name, and on the last syllable when it's a woman's name.

I didn't know that. . .