It's really nice, it has the motion of a story, all right.
Keep up like this!
If you need to write lines in Dutch (it's your mother language, if I'm not mistaken, right?), I'm sure there'd be people here to translate them. Even so, with a photostory like this, only looking at the pictures would be very entertaining. Many of my compatriots don't speak English, and follow my stories ... (Which I might translate, but they ... sound like in English to me, so, I don't intend to.)
Anyway, congratulations, Pete. It's a good work.
Gus